Thursday, November 14, 2013

Final Portfolio Reflection


One of the assignments that I’m most proud of is the second Hamlet character post. I really captured the essence of Hamlet’s character in this post because it mirrors his self-hatred that he spewed in his soliloquy in Act 2. My favorite lines are “Actors of Hollywood have more valor than I do. Players of the 1600s have more emotional connection to the loss of loved ones than I do” because I paralleled what Hamlet addressed in his soliloquy (the fact that the players could garner more emotion than him) with the movie trailer and came up with a similar line that he may have uttered in response. I embedded the quotes into my sentences well which allowed me to create a mixture of what Hamlet said and my own input to create a realistic reaction he would have had to seeing the Taken trailer. One thing that I could have done better was the introduction/background information. I needed to make sure the reader knew the plot of the movie, but I feel like I could have incorporated my character’s voice into it better to provide for a smoother transition into the rest of the blog post.

I learned to compare and contrast quotes from different sources as I compared Hamlet’s cowardly inaction to Bryan’s heroic actions. After this post I found it easier to write blog post #5 where I had to perform a similar task. Comparing quotes from the song with quotes from the play was much easier after I did basically the same thing with the second blog post.

Another blog post that I really like is the creative project one. I wanted to do something with food for my project because of the major theme of hunger in The Life of Pi (plus I’m always looking for an excuse to eat food), and I thought of a really good way to do this while addressing complexity and deeper meanings of the text. I also wrote a very clear and concise thesis for this project and included quotations from the book that related closely to both my thesis and the brownie cookies themselves. The most important thing about this project, however, was that I learned to write theses better as a result. I went in after school for help on my thesis writing and it really showed in my project which I was very happy with.

My participation in class changed for the better over the course of the trimester. At first I was really unsure with my abilities and a little afraid of being wrong in my analysis of literature which hindered my ability to search the deeper meanings of pieces. As the trimester progressed, though, things began to click and I became more comfortable contributing in class.

The last half of the trimester I found myself contributing to almost every class discussion. For example, when we were discussing the use of metaphysical conceit in John Donne’s Batter My Heart, Three-Personed God I pointed out the irony in the author’s description of God’s actions as they seemed to have connotations of lust, yet still described the author’s desire for chastity (“Nor ever chast, except you ravish me” (Donne)). I actively engaged in the conversation and left class feeling a lot more comfortable with the poem.

One of my goals for the trimester was to improve my multiple choice scores on AP practice tests. We took a practice test in the beginning of the trimester and I performed less than desirably (I got 59% of the questions correct) and set some goals for improvement. My first goal was to score at least a 70% on a multiple choice test at the end of first trimester by practicing my skills throughout the tri. This trimester (in addition to writing multiple choice questions in class and taking another practice exam in class) I practiced my multiple choice skills on an AP test I found online. I think it was the culmination of all of these steps that led to me reaching my goal of a 70% on the multiple choice we took at the end of the trimester. I think with more practice in the B section of the course I will become even more comfortable with this section of the exam and I will be able to reach my 85% goal.

Another one of my goals was to be able to analyze poetry more effectively. I remember in the beginning of the trimester I had trouble even comprehending the meaning of some pomes so I made it my goal to read and analyze a couple poems (especially ones from older time periods) per week so that by the end of the course I could have the ability to read and analyze a piece of poetry in less than five minutes. I included a specific time in my goal because come May I will be under strict time restraints when reading pieces and answering questions about them. At first I would just read a poem and try to understand the basic meaning, but as I practiced, I started to piece together techniques the poets used to create that meaning, even in pieces of writing from older time periods. In this section’s final exam, for example, there were some questions about a Shakespearean sonnet on how Shakespeare shaped the meaning. I ended up only missing a couple questions in this section which is far better than the beginning of the trimester when I couldn’t even decipher what the authors were trying to portray. I do have a lot of room for improvement, though, as the poem at the end of the test didn’t go as well…but I have no worries! I haven’t reached my goal yet, but I will continue to practice poetry analysis and I expect to be able to consistently read and analyze a poem in less than five minutes by the end of second trimester.

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